As a new writer, I would like some critiques from the comments. For example, if I was writing about my opinions on a news, I would like some people who have different perspectives from me. Or if I post something cliché, it would be nice to be told.

I’m used to writing down my personal experience to resonate with the author. I remembered once I read an article on Medium and it’s about child abuse will increase the violent behaviors when they grow up. So, I took my father’s example that his mother was hit by his father a lot during the childhood Therefore, my dad swore he would never land a hand on a woman.

So, I recommend this author could also interview these cases to know what’s their thoughts of making a difference when they grow up.