"it reflects a parent/child relationship typical of Asian culture." Indeed, I think I have to write from the audienc's perspectives.

Not everyone like you has experienced life to tell the difference of countries' cultures. I was ofen told they couldn't understand what I said first time read it.

I always indulge in my own mind and writing down my emotions. Now, I know the path that I need to work on to be a better writer...who derserves to be paid, lol.